Lumi,
I am going to give my AAR from my perspective watching your video.
Overall I think you did a great job.
1. You had a plan and a sound plan at that from the start. You were limited in you units, and you made a decision on how to use them, and from the start would work. (remember all plans come apart the moment you make contact).
2. You decided to go with tanks up front, and based on the unit types I think that was a good idea facing armor company and CAV troop.
(Yes you could have used one or two warriors and their troops as scouts, and saved the rest for the town areas.)
3. When your units ran into trouble you maneuvered your forces against the enemy by flanking them. You consolidated your forces to put the most steel down range. Good move at that time.
(with that said you then left part of your sector open, failed to destroy all units in sector by doing that)
4. You had good control of the movement, and worked it well.
(yes the warriors could have stayed a little closer, and maybe that was due to the pace quickened after you gathered your forces)
5. When you ran into the units in the south, you tried to maneuver your forces. Good idea.
(you did not have the room to maneuver, and kept pushing. You ultimately did what a good CO will do and listened to your platoon leaders, and flanked. It would have worked if you had not lost so many units.)
6. (Use arty a little more)
7. (Over time you will learn better when to control more, and let units go more.)
8. (Always remember the overall mission as CO)
9. You did well
A. Your unit leaders understood their jobs
B. Communication was clear and understood by those that needed it.
C. You devised a plan, you adapted your plan, you fought your plan, you succeeded with you plan, and you should always be OK with following through with your mission. You do what you can with what you have, and the information you have at the time you make them.
D. Are there things to improve upon??? YES, but you did a fine job.

10. I look forward to you as a CO in ever increasingly complex missions, and your continued victories/learning/adapting as you learn. Here is to you and your future abilities as a great CO!!!!